5 PAGE YA MANUSCRIPT CRITIQUE
WITH EVERY $20 BID SHE WILL ADD 5 PAGES!!!
You could win a FULL BETA READ*!
*of course this does depend on the number of pages and your wonderful generosity.
I write YA paranormal and am represented by Rubin Pfeffer of East-West Literary. I have numerous short stories published, including CURSED in the anthology PLAYTHINGS OF THE GODS from Drollerie Press. I am offering a five page critique of a YA manuscript. I will look at macro issues (including character development, flow, and whether you are staring in the right place) and Micro issues (including word repetition, sensory detail, word choice, and sentence structure). For every twenty dollars bid, I will up the critique by five pages. I'm willing to go all the way to a full beta read if you are!!